Statement :
Jordan Taylor is a 16 year old in his second to last year of high school (as of 2010). He currently has no major qualifications, but is working on attaining grades in Computing Science, English and Philosophy to name 3. He was the initiator and a current major proponent of the
'Fifth Dimensional Qualia' theory and has ambitions of it settling a significant portion of debate in the philosophy of mind.
Fix a few things.