Hi David, Thanks for the update to you camp statement. Nice improvements. I did notice a few nit picky issues though. I was tempted to just fix at least one of them in a wiki way, but figured it'd be better just to point some of them out to you so you can better know what they are. Should "Paramount of a system to test," be "Paramount TO a system to test"? I don't really know if this makes sense - alone: "I requires to establish and promote time and date when this can be done." Perhaps you could be reworded? Brent Allsop