Brent_Allsop replied 13 years ago (Nov 3rd 2010, 7:36:27 am)
Thanks for the update to you camp statement. Nice improvements.
I did notice a few nit picky issues though. I was tempted to just fix at least one of them in a wiki way, but figured it'd be better just to point some of them out to you so you can better know what they are.
Should "Paramount of a system to test," be "Paramount TO a system to test"?
I don't really know if this makes sense - alone: "I requires to establish and promote time and date when this can be done."
Perhaps you could be reworded?